Oh my god. Oh my god this is fantastic, and everything you write makes me flail around like an idiot, but god, I just utterly LOVE your Patrick. I love that it's a little awkward and Patrick doesn't know what to do and that at first it's the worst sex he's ever had. Because, um, YES. And I love how everything clicks for him at the end. I love that you put so much into just 700 words. <3
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Date: 2007-07-05 12:42 am (UTC)