Oh this was lovely :) Particularly impressive how you manage to make the final pairing so convincing almost because of Ianto's continued love for Lisa, and despite that the first two times he and Jack got together it was wrong on so many levels. Very nice portrayal of Ianto, hurting but definitely not utterly submissive, if anything he was the one to use Jack in the first instance, though equally it was a good reminder that Jack himself is no saint when it came to his dealing with Ianto post-Cyberwoman.
The idea of the ghost of Lisa stuck in the Hub was a great touch, and I really liked how Jack in the end felt sorry for both her and Ianto, realising it was Ianto keeping her there. All in all, lovely lovely fic. Bravo!
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Date: 2006-12-12 12:14 pm (UTC)The idea of the ghost of Lisa stuck in the Hub was a great touch, and I really liked how Jack in the end felt sorry for both her and Ianto, realising it was Ianto keeping her there. All in all, lovely lovely fic. Bravo!