I love love this, especially just how it flows with canon so well. I mean, I feel like a lot of the development of character interaction is kept so offscreen that you have these interesting jumps, and it's nice to be able to fill some of it in. And Jack, who's such an enigma, comes out great here. Well done!
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Date: 2006-12-12 05:47 am (UTC)