*grins!* I could just so see Rodney and Zelenka falling into that kind of pattern with the science team--and then it became obvious to me that Rodney would think of himself as the good cop. He's That Kind of Guy!
I'm glad you liked the pacing, also. I wanted it to pick up as the day went on and on, but never rush, and then the sudden slowness of real time again--swept along describes exactly what I was hoping for. Thank you so much!
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Date: 2005-07-26 10:36 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked the pacing, also. I wanted it to pick up as the day went on and on, but never rush, and then the sudden slowness of real time again--swept along describes exactly what I was hoping for. Thank you so much!