as everyone has said before, i loved the story, your rodney voice, the punish the idiots day and oh, just everything in this story. the pacing and rhythm of the story was excellent, i love how desperate and zesty everything had got, almost to breaking point(rodney freaking out about the pretty comment and john not being able to stop the repeated day). and then everything slowed down and they slept during the last-that-day and still managed to resolve the issues between them and woke up the next day with all possibilites open to them. (i esp. like this allusion to sleep being some sort of... um, denial and confusion that rodney has been going through?)
oh, i babble. but really, <3 this story (and all your stories) lots!
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Date: 2005-07-26 09:52 am (UTC)oh, i babble. but really, <3 this story (and all your stories) lots!