"You'll have to tell me what you do want, then. I can't really tell."
Ianto rolls his eyes. "You're a liar," he says. "I won't say a word more about it."
This just wins the prize - I don't think I've EVER read that first line before where it wasn't followed by "Please fuck me" or something to that effect. IANTO IS SO NOT LIKE EVERYONE ELSE.
"Yeah, well, isn't it nice to be Jack's pet?"
Yes it sure is! XD XD XD
Jack's possessiveness as he watches Owen take care of Ianto is very compelling. I like the way it drives Jack to go after Ianto, when he's been resisting.
"You're for me" - that's just exactly right.
And Ianto - guh! - hotness!!! - first time and he is so enthusiastic about it! (But of course Ianto isn't going to do ANYTHING poorly.) I like Jack showing him how to suck him - another thing I can't remember seeing anywhere else.
I really love a good first-time fic, and this is a GREAT one.
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Date: 2007-01-07 09:40 am (UTC)Ianto rolls his eyes. "You're a liar," he says. "I won't say a word more about it."
This just wins the prize - I don't think I've EVER read that first line before where it wasn't followed by "Please fuck me" or something to that effect. IANTO IS SO NOT LIKE EVERYONE ELSE.
"Yeah, well, isn't it nice to be Jack's pet?"
Yes it sure is! XD XD XD
Jack's possessiveness as he watches Owen take care of Ianto is very compelling. I like the way it drives Jack to go after Ianto, when he's been resisting.
"You're for me" - that's just exactly right.
And Ianto - guh! - hotness!!! - first time and he is so enthusiastic about it! (But of course Ianto isn't going to do ANYTHING poorly.) I like Jack showing him how to suck him - another thing I can't remember seeing anywhere else.
I really love a good first-time fic, and this is a GREAT one.