I really liked this. I really liked the slow rhythm of it, the gradual peace that Ianto makes with his grief, with his attempt to hold on to Lisa, with the slow way he stops holding himself back so tightly. I loved the way you've captured Jack -- both the serious intensity and the mischievous air of him -- and I swear I could *hear* the voices of the other characters as I read the lines.

Good pacing and terrific characterisation: this was worth staying up to 2am to finish.