elynross ([identity profile] elynross.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] giddygeek 2006-12-12 03:25 am (UTC)

Oh, and a small thing:

...and he covers his mouth with his hand, hoping that somehow has Jack slept through Lisa's last visit.

I think it should be "that somehow Jack has slept..."

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