The house was enormous, modern, and well-lit. "I am so creeped out right now," Rodney said, trailing sensor wires down the hall, carefully keeping them separate of the video wires. "My skin is crawling, I feel cold. I think, oh, I think I just felt the hand of death on my shoulder."


hee hee hee!

This is so amazingly fun! It's flirty and funny and the scary parts were SCARY and the imagery: the water against the windows, the giant beasties swimming in it... wow.

Rodney and John translate well anywhere, when they're written as well as this.

Hooray!